This was written for Monday’s Finish the Story challenge. 100-150 word limit starting with “She was unaware she was being watched..” and using the photo prompt for inspiration.
Copyright – Barbara W. Beacham
She was unaware she was being watched, no coveted, by those fierce, golden orbs. That which would end her, hidden and waiting. It was probably for the best. Given an option of knowing or not knowing she always said she would choose the former and did. Always safe in the certain. Ignorance of what would be finally allowed her to live fully, even if briefly. Terror and the stabbing pain of her organs trying to win the race could have been the last thing she felt. Instead, as she navigated her way through the final minutes of beats and breath without a compass, nothing but bliss.
Nicely done! Thanks for writing for this challenge! I hope that you join in again next week! ^..^
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Thank you! I’m looking forward to it already : )
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Nicely done and very deep. I loved it!
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Thank you!
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I think if the end was inevitable I wouldn’t want to have to go through all the worry, panic and pain either.
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Poor bunny! But, she was happily oblivious at the end…
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It’s important to finish the race. Great that she fought till the end. Very positive 🙂
Nicely expressed!
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Thank you!
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